Lawyer creatively defends client from legalese

Lawyer creatively defends client from legalese

If I need a lawyer, I’m gonna call up Mr. Kaplitt. Here’s a letter he wrote for a client who received a “cease and desist” letter written in indecipherable legalese. Huffington Post posted a short video about this one. Or read his letter for yourself. Bet Mr. Kaplitt’s phone has been ringing off the hook! Related…

Code-switching in written language
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Code-switching in written language

We naturally adapt our language based on our social surroundings: we choose different words to describe the same thing when addressing our pals in a pub, our professor at a pub, our professor in class, or our grandmother on the phone. I’ve written about this before as code-switching. When code-switching appears in written language, some folks experience…

It’s about COMMUNICATION, stupid!
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It’s about COMMUNICATION, stupid!

My first new post in a while. And I’m ranting — albeit somewhat quietly. This time I’m reacting to a newly published research article about assessing student writing within MOOCs. Balfour, the author, provides a review of two technologies for assessing writing when you have a huge student-to-teacher ratio: Automated Essay Scoring (AES) and Calibrated…

Pros avoid sexist language
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Pros avoid sexist language

Within Western culture, there are few workplaces with ONLY men or ONLY women. In theory, our workplaces are gender neutral. Our language, however, sometimes perpetuates a world in which women are subservient to men. Sexist language is commonly characterized using six issues: pseudo-generic pronoun, he (e.g., When an employee asks for a raise, he should be brief.) pseudo-generic noun,…

You can satisfy consumers and legal at the same time
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You can satisfy consumers and legal at the same time

Thanks to Christopher Trudeau, law professor and plain language champion, I just viewed the Terms of Service for CodePen. Proof that the company takes its consumers and its legal risks seriously! I especially like the clear version of the copyright and content ownership clause: The things you make on CodePen are yours, “CodePen” is ours. …

More on the limitations of style analysis
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More on the limitations of style analysis

Not long ago, I wrote about the limitations of considering only style as the textual element that determines plain language (or quality workplace writing).  I made the point that over-reliance on style analysis is a reason software tools are not all that helpful.  Well . . . I just had time to read the Johnson…

What is the evidence of literacy decline caused by texting?
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What is the evidence of literacy decline caused by texting?

I’m working on a post about taboo words (that means swearing or profanity) that’s not ready for prime time — and recovering from the flu. In the meantime, I highly recommend  today’s post over at Motivated Grammar. Gabe’s point is that, when people don’t actually understand how language works, they see decline and deterioration in language different…

Forbes on learning to write for the workplace in college
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Forbes on learning to write for the workplace in college

I just read a Forbes piece from a while back that’s worth a minute: Why Trying to Learn Clear Writing in College is Like Trying to Learn Sobriety in a Bar. Writing education in the US does not empower our students. They are not encouraged to write in a way that communicates to workplace readers….